Ponyville Redux

First look at this makes a real impact on me, the placement of the hexagons (and lack of) is well done, and the text font fits in well also. The very soft vignette at the corners adds a nice subtle border to the work as well, whilst not overpowering. I see many works with a vignette too strong, and that can take away from the picture, unless that is the desired effect; so good work with that. I also really liked the way you have composed the background with the grit and smaller hexagons to complement the theme of the larger ones.

Now with the improvements. I would firstly say that the main hexagons need to be darkened just a little to allow the background some notice, as the main attention is on the town centre building, and that can be distracting when looking at the background (on the right). Also just a minor pick, the picture of Ponyville needs some sort of gritty filter over it as the lines are too defined and don't match with the background behind away from the hexagons.

Overall I really love this work, and you have done a fantastic job with it.